until I`m gone

[مصطفى قطورة]

here it goes
to who knows
the sun dies
the flower grows

the day passes
and feel no pain
cause I`m with you
under the rain

if we say hi
or we say goodbye
it doesnt matter
cause we will try
there is one fact
i cant deny
that i love you
I love your eye

dont ask me
who am I
I`m all yours
and you are mine
please tell me
that you are fine
cause I`m dying
but I don`t mind
just don`t ask me
whats going on
just say you love me
until I`m gone

[whiteangel350]

Alsalam 3alaykom
Elpoem bta3tak feeha e7sas 7elw awy w edert t3abar 3an e7sasak w masha3rak bas kan 3andi shwayet mal7ozat lw mafeehash waqa7a meni mesh 3arfa tesma7ly a2olhom wala la2.Bos ana ha2olhom 3alashan afeedak w argo en naqdi mayday2aksh :)


Ana hakteblak elpoem in a new version bta3i welly beeh elpoem hateb2a sa7 isa :)
here we go
to who knows
the sun dies
the flowers grow

the days pass
and feel no pain
cause I`m with you
under the rain

if we say hi
or we say goodbye
it doesn't matter
cause we will try
there is one fact
i can't deny
that i love you
I love your eye

don't ask me
who I am
I`m all yours
and you are mine
please tell me
that you are fine
cause I`m dying
but I don`t mind
just don`t ask me
what's going on
just say you love me
until I`m gone

Thank you :)

[مصطفى قطورة]

Alsalam 3alaykom
Elpoem bta3tak feeha e7sas 7elw awy w edert t3abar 3an e7sasak w masha3rak bas kan 3andi shwayet mal7ozat lw mafeehash waqa7a meni mesh 3arfa tesma7ly a2olhom wala la2.Bos ana ha2olhom 3alashan afeedak w argo en naqdi mayday2aksh :)


Ana hakteblak elpoem in a new version bta3i welly beeh elpoem hateb2a sa7 isa :)
here we go
to who knows
the sun dies
the flowers grow

the days pass
and feel no pain
cause I`m with you
under the rain

if we say hi
or we say goodbye
it doesn't matter
cause we will try
there is one fact
i can't deny
that i love you
I love your eye

don't ask me
who I am
I`m all yours
and you are mine
please tell me
that you are fine
cause I`m dying
but I don`t mind
just don`t ask me
what's going on
just say you love me
until I`m gone

Thank you :)

بالعكس اطلاقا ً ..
الواحد سعيد والمفيد اننا كلنا نستفيد ..
في حاجات بتفق معاكي فيها في التصحيح ..
وحاجات لا ..
والخلاف لا يفسد في الود قضية ..

here we goes
صح مفروض تبقى
here it goes
افضل

و dieing
صح
dying

اما باقي التصحيحات
لا اتفق معاكي فيها

لان who am I
تعبير صحيح في اللغة الامريكية

و باقي التعبيرات ممكن تاخد s
اعترف بغلطي في we goes

بس في الباقي لا اتفق ..

وتحياتي لك ِ ..
وشكرا ً على الملحوظات الثمينة

[sadeq2007]

Really A Wonderful
Thanks Alottt

[hayfa-xc]

شكرا على مجهودك

[wecaoniddmab891]

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