Love And Sadness Poems I Wrote

[a-r]

السلام عليكم و رحمه الله و بركاته ......

هذه بعض القصائد و الخواطر الشعريه التي الفتها ...... ارجو ان تنال اعجابكم


Shadows Of Confusion



sometimes she love you
she lost in you
she will die for you


some times she say

who said i love you ?!
who said i care about you ?!
i don't care about you !!!!!


this words made me fall
in the shadows of confusion
my heart hide behind the smile
while he is bleeding a tears from blood
from her words ..........


she might playing a kids game
and don't love me
or play with my feelings toward her
but why !!!!!!!
what i have done to her for all that

is that the cost of my love to her ?
is that the cost of my love to her ?

but why she do that with me ?
i asked myself this question more than 10000 time
i woken now ... to find myself
in the shadows of confusion


i was ready to give her my name
my heart ...... my life


she might be confused from me
or she think that i am playing with her a game
but why she thinked with that way ???
she must follow her heart to know that i love her
or not ................ her heart will guide her

her heart will say to her that i cant sleep
before kissing her pic ........
her heart will say to her that i cant live
without her ......

i finished all my relationships with another girls
only for her ...........
some girls cried a tears from blood
and said to me plz don't go
some girls was going to die from sadness

is that the cost of my love to you ?
plz answer me .........
is that the cost ?
tell me ... tell me
you love me or not ??



I KNOW !



I know exactly what I am looking for,
Out of the girls for all my life,
She might want some kids one day,
And to get married and be my wife

I know that this girl will be sweet,
A little bit on the competitive side, :)
Someone that doesn't give in at all,
And fights for what she feels inside

I know that this girl will be funny,
Someone who likes the things I do,
Someone who wants to be loved,
But only wants a love so true

I know that this girl will be confident,
Yet have the most fragile heart,
And I will do my best to protect it,
And never break her beauty apart

I know that she will do things to me,
Like no one ever could do before
And it wont be hard for her to see,
She's the one I most adore

I know that she will be real smart,
And love to do things together,
I guess I know what I am looking for,
And it's a love that lasts forever

I know that she will be someone,
That will be perfect, just for me,
Finally I will be introduced,
To this thing thats called a meant to be




و هناك المزيد و لكن هل تعجبكم هذه الكلمات ام لا ؟ ارجو ان تدلوا بأرائكم


و السلام عليكم و رحمه الله و بركاته

[كويحة]

hey ,, thanks a lot

the idea or the concept of your words is very good, but you have some problems with grammar

thanks again :)

[a-r]

hey ,, thanks a lot

the idea or the concept of your words is very good, but you have some problems with grammar

thanks again :)



thx for your reply i will try to avoid it next time

[dangar]

بجد رااااااااااااائع جدا
وانت قولت ان هناك المزيد فهل ممكن تنزله فى المنتدى
وشكرا

[a-r]

بجد رااااااااااااائع جدا
وانت قولت ان هناك المزيد فهل ممكن تنزله فى المنتدى
وشكرا



مشكور اخي الكريم علي الرد و بأذن الله سأضع المزيد

[manjulok]

Hey

Really, you are nice and have fine thoughts, romance n passions but as some one says; you need some work in grammar n every thing is going to b all right.

Regards

[a-r]

Hey

Really, you are nice and have fine thoughts, romance n passions but as some one says; you need some work in grammar n every thing is going to b all right.

Regards


thx for your reply man i will try to avoid my grammar wrong words

[happytofita]

Do not care about grammar mistake since you are writing POETRY. Most of famous poets do not care about grammar when writing a poem.I will give an example of a well known poet, Shakespeare in his poem : When My Love Swears that she is made of truth.


1. When my love swears that she is made of truth,
2. I do believe her though I know she lies,
3. That she might think me some untutored youth,
4. Unlearned in the world's false subtleties.
5. Thus vainly thinking that she thinks me young,
6. Although she knows my days are past the best,
7. Simply I credit her false-speaking tongue:
8. On both sides thus is simple truth suppressed:
9. But wherefore says she not she is unjust?
10. And wherefore say not I that I am old?
11. O! love's best habit is in seeming trust,
12. And age in love, loves not to have years told:
13. Therefore I lie with her, and she with me,
14. And in our faults by lies we flattered be.

The poem is full of mistakes, and of course you do not imagin that Shakespeare made such mistakes. Also, most writer used to make mistake while typing because they did not have WORD to delete and to change style of writing or anything, they just had those old typing machines,and when they made a mistake while typing, they did not correct it, they say this is how my body correspond ; my body wants me to write this and not that thing in my mind.


Just do not care about grammar and structure when writing poetry, feel free to write anything.

[a-r]

Do not care about grammar mistake since you are writing POETRY. Most of famous poets do not care about grammar when writing a poem.I will give an example of a well known poet, Shakespeare in his poem : When My Love Swears that she is made of truth.


1. When my love swears that she is made of truth,
2. I do believe her though I know she lies,
3. That she might think me some untutored youth,
4. Unlearned in the world's false subtleties.
5. Thus vainly thinking that she thinks me young,
6. Although she knows my days are past the best,
7. Simply I credit her false-speaking tongue:
8. On both sides thus is simple truth suppressed:
9. But wherefore says she not she is unjust?
10. And wherefore say not I that I am old?
11. O! love's best habit is in seeming trust,
12. And age in love, loves not to have years told:
13. Therefore I lie with her, and she with me,
14. And in our faults by lies we flattered be.

The poem is full of mistakes, and of course you do not imagin that Shakespeare made such mistakes. Also, most writer used to make mistake while typing because they did not have WORD to delete and to change style of writing or anything, they just had those old typing machines,and when they made a mistake while typing, they did not correct it, they say this is how my body correspond ; my body wants me to write this and not that thing in my mind.


Just do not care about grammar and structure when writing poetry, feel free to write anything.



well u r right man in your opinion when i write poetry my heart write this words not me so u should find a grammer mistakes and i think that the poet that dont have a grammer mistake it is boring or not good am i right ? :D thx for your opinion^^

[happytofita]

Yes, it is better to read this : When my love swears that she is made of truth, than reading this : When my love swears that she is saying the truth. It gives something special


In mathematics 1+1=2, but in literature 1+1=10000

[a-r]

Yes, it is better to read this : When my love swears that she is made of truth, than reading this : When my love swears that she is saying the truth. It gives something special


In mathematics 1+1=2, but in literature 1+1=10000



yep in literature it equals more than numbers ! it equals feeling of a heart who is bleeding or is happy ...........