صورتان من عدستي (((أرجو النقد )))

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بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم



صورتين من تصويري

و أرجو النقد

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[HeLL RoSe]

السلام عليكم انا بداية بدرس تصوير فوتوغرافي مش من زمان بس حبيت الموضوع وبقت هوايتي المفضلة بس دراستي بالانجلش وهحاول انقد بالعربي و اسمحلي

الصورة الاولى بجد خرافة ما شاء الله جميلة قووي الزاوية اللي اخترتها حلوة قوووي والالوان متناغمة جداو خاصة انك عرفت تتحكم في ال(Depth of field) بطريقة روعة و خليت الشجرة تكون (in Focus) و الباقي (out of focus) وبالتالي خليت التركيز عليها برغم انها في الجمب وغالبا دي مش من المناطق اللي بتجذب العين بجد بهنيك على الصورة دي

نيجي بقى للصورة التانية دي للاسف خانتك مهارتك لانها متتقارنش بجمال الصورة اللي قبليها خالص هنا الصورة تقريبا كلها درجات مختلفة من لون واحد و ده مش بيظهر السحلية اللي المفروض يكون التركيز عليها والزاوية مش مظبوطة

يا رب اكون مسبتش حاجة و مش واضحة و تسلم ايديك على جهدك واسمحلي

[kouki-ks]

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[kouki-ks]

bcouoooooooooooop

[adnan_yma]

الصورة الأولى عندي ياها من حوالي سنة وأنا واضعها على سطح المكتب
يمكن أنت مصورها

ما أدري

بس أنا شايفها تماما من سنة

الصورة الثانية

للأسف

[NATTARIOUS]

السلام عليكم انا بداية بدرس تصوير فوتوغرافي مش من زمان بس حبيت الموضوع وبقت هوايتي المفضلة بس دراستي بالانجلش وهحاول انقد بالعربي و اسمحلي

الصورة الاولى بجد خرافة ما شاء الله جميلة قووي الزاوية اللي اخترتها حلوة قوووي والالوان متناغمة جداو خاصة انك عرفت تتحكم في ال(Depth of field) بطريقة روعة و خليت الشجرة تكون (in Focus) و الباقي (out of focus) وبالتالي خليت التركيز عليها برغم انها في الجمب وغالبا دي مش من المناطق اللي بتجذب العين بجد بهنيك على الصورة دي

نيجي بقى للصورة التانية دي للاسف خانتك مهارتك لانها متتقارنش بجمال الصورة اللي قبليها خالص هنا الصورة تقريبا كلها درجات مختلفة من لون واحد و ده مش بيظهر السحلية اللي المفروض يكون التركيز عليها والزاوية مش مظبوطة

يا رب اكون مسبتش حاجة و مش واضحة و تسلم ايديك على جهدك واسمحلي

Hello there...

First congratulations to Hell Rose as your first reviewer my friend...
It is the same thing here about me tho! I can write Arabic, but it will take me for ever to spell without Arabic keyboard!

So please forgive me and hope you won't get confused of the language, sigh! Now...

I kinda agree about the Rose's review and the POV which is "POINT OF VIEW" but I want to add, I guess by using your N73 point and shoot mobile camera and not a SLR "PROFESSIONAL" camera or at least PAS "POINT AND SHOOT" camera... You faced some troubles...

1- I can see that you used ISO 100 settings on your phone which caused you the grain or you can call it noise as you can see it in your shot! It is just that ISO setting with 1/333 of your shutter speed doesn't match during this time of the day and light

2- About the tree on the right side and Rose stated that it is in focus and the rest if out of focus.. I don't see any difference between the two points it is a fixed lens and both points looks the same to me...

The warm colours are kinda cool tho! And I like the DOF " Depth Of Field" I meant the mountains of course..

I wish if you could take this the same pic with a better camera and by then you will have to things to try...

First take a shot with the tree but from a bit further to the back! Try to reach the top of it as well as the ground

Second try to setup your ISO Setting to ISO-200 and your shutter speed at: 1/200 or less

I bet you will get a superb results...

Also try to take another shot but without the tree at all!! Try to be more closer to the ground and give a bigger space from the mountains to the sky, you know what I mean eh!

Now about the second closeup shot, It is kinda nice try and attempt... Yes, it is out of focus for two reasons

1- You used the digital zoon on your phone, and when you use it you look the sensitivity on that lens

2- These type of closeup shots you will need a tripod if you are not that pro who can handle hand shaking!

Other then that!! I still do love both pictures and you did a great jop! Just keep posting and shooting more and more...

I bet you will produce some nice results soon

Thank you and regards

Mohamed H Hamed

[Vip-tito]

الصوره الأولى من كندا مدينة بريتش كلومبيا من كاملوبس

على العموم مشكورين على الردود و النقد

[Vip-tito]

Hello there...

First congratulations to Hell Rose as your first reviewer my friend...
It is the same thing here about me tho! I can write Arabic, but it will take me for ever to spell without Arabic keyboard!

So please forgive me and hope you won't get confused of the language, sigh! Now...

I kinda agree about the Rose's review and the POV which is "POINT OF VIEW" but I want to add, I guess by using your N73 point and shoot mobile camera and not a SLR "PROFESSIONAL" camera or at least PAS "POINT AND SHOOT" camera... You faced some troubles...

1- I can see that you used ISO 100 settings on your phone which caused you the grain or you can call it noise as you can see it in your shot! It is just that ISO setting with 1/333 of your shutter speed doesn't match during this time of the day and light

2- About the tree on the right side and Rose stated that it is in focus and the rest if out of focus.. I don't see any difference between the two points it is a fixed lens and both points looks the same to me...

The warm colours are kinda cool tho! And I like the DOF " Depth Of Field" I meant the mountains of course..

I wish if you could take this the same pic with a better camera and by then you will have to things to try...

First take a shot with the tree but from a bit further to the back! Try to reach the top of it as well as the ground

Second try to setup your ISO Setting to ISO-200 and your shutter speed at: 1/200 or less

I bet you will get a superb results...

Also try to take another shot but without the tree at all!! Try to be more closer to the ground and give a bigger space from the mountains to the sky, you know what I mean eh!

Now about the second closeup shot, It is kinda nice try and attempt... Yes, it is out of focus for two reasons

1- You used the digital zoon on your phone, and when you use it you look the sensitivity on that lens

2- These type of closeup shots you will need a tripod if you are not that pro who can handle hand shaking!

Other then that!! I still do love both pictures and you did a great jop! Just keep posting and shooting more and more...

I bet you will produce some nice results soon

Thank you and regards

Mohamed H Hamed

مشكور أخي على نقدك و على وقتك

أنا هحاول أخد الصوره مره تانيه بكمره 10 ميجابكسل و نطبق إلي قلت عليه و نشوف
لأن الأولى و التانيه كانت بكاميرا موبايل سوني أريكسون

مشكور على النقد

[NATTARIOUS]

مشكور أخي على نقدك و على وقتك

أنا هحاول أخد الصوره مره تانيه بكمره 10 ميجابكسل و نطبق إلي قلت عليه و نشوف
لأن الأولى و التانيه كانت بكاميرا موبايل سوني أريكسون

مشكور على النقد

Thank you for the reply...
And be sure that I will be waiting to see your newer ones, I bet they will be awesome with a higher resolution, no grain and blur!

You may want to take a look at my MACRO SHOTS on this link: http://www.bramjnet.com/vb3/showthread.php?t=477190

Hope you will like them

Thank you and many regards,

Mohamed H Hamed