Sound of my tears

[mido_3000]

Suddenly no one hears
And the voice getting louder
It’s the sound of my tears
The talking of my eyes
The whisper of my fears
The shadow of memories
All keep coming back to me
And you still in front of my sight
You still live in my darkest night
You still keep waving to me
You still keep come to me

I stayed alone with my mind
Thinking about how did you gone
Still wonder if you were the one
Really strange how the time has run
And the story suddenly done
Yes no one hears
Even if it was the voice of my tears
Setting gazing at people
And my mind wonders
The sky looks as big wholes
And the wind takes you
For nowhere, yes nowhere
And many questions still appears

For who did you cried those tears?
Can the night forget the moon?
What makes you forget?
Can the wind wipe those tears?
Or just you hear that sound
The sound of your tears
Or the sound of autumn
Stripping your tress
Leaving it naked
Just like your heart inside. Just like empty leaves


p.s: اقسم بالله انا اللي بكتب القصايد دي . وياريت بدل ما حد يشكك فيا اشوف حد يكون بيكب احسن مني لان دي هسيعدني جدا

[White Lily]

Asslamu Alikom
thank u 4 sharing us with all ur poems and experiances
I don't think there is any need to swear that these are ur poems coz I don't think there is any one who suspect it .
I like the new images you create
but here are my comments about the above peom.
thanks again for sharing us and keep it up

I stayed alone with my mind
Thinking about how did you go
Still wonder if you were the one
Really strange how the time has run
And the story suddenly is done
Yes no one hears
Even if it was the sound of my tears
Setting gazing at people
And my mind wonders
The sky looks as big holes
And the wind takes you
To nowhere, yes nowhere
And many questions still appear

For whom did you cry those tears?
Can the night forget the moon?
What makes you forget?
Can the wind wipe those tears?

[mido_3000]

thanks you but the corrections you made , maybe change meaning's in my poem , not all of them some of them is write and i wrote it write but the auto corrections feature in Microsoft-word made that error I'll pay more attention next time, thanks for ur comments