Box of secrets…

[mido_3000]

Nobody will know,believe me
That were are in love
Nobody will see
This passion into my eyes
I'll hide your secrets
Nobody will feel that whisper
I'll hide you in my blood
Even if time got longer
I'll keep you inside but
Keep pushing these limits
Let's steal some moments
Let's live it together
Let's write our touches
Day after day
Time after another
When we met alone
I felt belonging to your world
Everything I own
Is due to you
Believe me no one will know
I'll kept you in my heart
I love to see you around
And nobody knows us
I love it when we look
To each other with love
And nobody understands
What goes in our mind?
We touch and we say hi
You touch my heart
The time stop
I wish I can shout
Saying that I melt like ice
But baby don't be afraid
I'll hide your secrets
Inside that box... You will remain in my heart and nobody will know


the forum poet

[fadyb56]

nice did u copy it
or u did it and if u did it
how long it took from u cuz it is relly nice and i like it

[mido_3000]

hey fadyb56
first of all thank you for your comment, secondly search the internet or all old poetry books or even the new 1 and if u found it copied,tell me
i just want to tell u something important, i am talented (ولله الحمد)
and i am posting those words to see if there someone can challenge me and give me new aiming, i hope you got it
p.s it really took along time to write such words

[التحدي الصعب]

its great.may allah save u

[c-ly]

so great, congatulation for this great talent
i really like it.

go on

[reporterdeluna]

I can even describe what u have done

keep walking

[سطور الزمان]

thank you for this nice secret box.

[علام المنشاوى]

very gooooooooooood <<<<<

[bata_ebeed]

ver nice thank u to give us chance to :smailes20::smailes20:read these words:smailes89::smailes89: