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Each of the following sentences contains a faulty comparison. Rewrite each sentence to eliminate the error.
a. The word-processing equipment in the direct-mail department op*erates more efficiently than the customer relations department.
b. The production manager expressed greater appreciation for the temporary help than the sales manager.
c. Julia Valenti, the personnel manager, felt that the applicant was better qualified than Charles Crane, the director of office services.
Each of the following sentences contains a squinting modifier – that is, a modifier that may qualify either of two elements within the sen*tence. Locate the modifier and rewrite the sentence in two ways.
a. The transformer that was sparking violently shocked the line opera*tor.
b. The man who was making calculations hastily rose from the desk and left the room.
c. After the committee decided that the work must be completed by Monday, in spite of other commitments, it adjourned immediately.
d. He planned after the convention to take a short vacation.
Each of the following sentences contains an unclear pronoun reference. Rewrite the sentences as necessary to eliminate the errors.
a. Many members complained that their representatives made deci*sions secretly without considering them.
b. Technology has so simplified computer operation that it is now being used in homes.
c. The crane operator did not file a safety grievance and does not plan it.
d. Our company decided to relocate in Grandview Hills, after rejecting Westville and Dale City, which was a difficult decision to make.
e. Anita has held stenographic positions in two insurance companies and in an auto-rental firm, and it should help her in finding a new job.
f. Mrs. Jardina wanted to dictate a letter to her assistant, Mrs. Sanfre*dini, but she was unable to begin work until after lunch.
g. If you feel that you would like to become a dental hygienist, by all means take a course in it.
Each of the following sentences contains a redundant word, phrase, or clause. Rewrite the sentences to eliminate the redundant elements.
a. Our experienced salespeople, who have many years of work behind them, will plan an aggressive advertising campaign to sell the new product.
b. Any two raceway assemblies can be connected together with the plate as shown.
c. The radio announcer kept repeatedly saying, "Buy PDQ brand pret*zels!"
d. Dissatisfied employees should give their complaints to the manager who is in charge as supervisor.
e. If you are interested in economics, do not neglect to read the above*mentioned book, which was discussed previously.
Each of the following sentences contains at least one padded phrase. Rewrite the sentences to eliminate such phrases.
a. We began the project in the month of April.
b. He opened the conversation with a reference to the subject of infla*tion.
c. The field of engineering is a profession that offers great opportuni*ties.
d. The process was delayed because of the fact that the chemicals were impure.
e. The personnel manager spoke to the printing-plant supervisor with regard to the scheduling of employee vacations.
f. Due to the fact that Monday was a holiday, we will not be able to complete the job until Wednesday.
a. The word-processing equipment in the direct-mail department op*erates more efficiently than the customer relations department.
b. The production manager expressed greater appreciation for the temporary help than the sales manager.
c. Julia Valenti, the personnel manager, felt that the applicant was better qualified than Charles Crane, the director of office services.
Each of the following sentences contains a squinting modifier – that is, a modifier that may qualify either of two elements within the sen*tence. Locate the modifier and rewrite the sentence in two ways.
a. The transformer that was sparking violently shocked the line opera*tor.
b. The man who was making calculations hastily rose from the desk and left the room.
c. After the committee decided that the work must be completed by Monday, in spite of other commitments, it adjourned immediately.
d. He planned after the convention to take a short vacation.
Each of the following sentences contains an unclear pronoun reference. Rewrite the sentences as necessary to eliminate the errors.
a. Many members complained that their representatives made deci*sions secretly without considering them.
b. Technology has so simplified computer operation that it is now being used in homes.
c. The crane operator did not file a safety grievance and does not plan it.
d. Our company decided to relocate in Grandview Hills, after rejecting Westville and Dale City, which was a difficult decision to make.
e. Anita has held stenographic positions in two insurance companies and in an auto-rental firm, and it should help her in finding a new job.
f. Mrs. Jardina wanted to dictate a letter to her assistant, Mrs. Sanfre*dini, but she was unable to begin work until after lunch.
g. If you feel that you would like to become a dental hygienist, by all means take a course in it.
Each of the following sentences contains a redundant word, phrase, or clause. Rewrite the sentences to eliminate the redundant elements.
a. Our experienced salespeople, who have many years of work behind them, will plan an aggressive advertising campaign to sell the new product.
b. Any two raceway assemblies can be connected together with the plate as shown.
c. The radio announcer kept repeatedly saying, "Buy PDQ brand pret*zels!"
d. Dissatisfied employees should give their complaints to the manager who is in charge as supervisor.
e. If you are interested in economics, do not neglect to read the above*mentioned book, which was discussed previously.
Each of the following sentences contains at least one padded phrase. Rewrite the sentences to eliminate such phrases.
a. We began the project in the month of April.
b. He opened the conversation with a reference to the subject of infla*tion.
c. The field of engineering is a profession that offers great opportuni*ties.
d. The process was delayed because of the fact that the chemicals were impure.
e. The personnel manager spoke to the printing-plant supervisor with regard to the scheduling of employee vacations.
f. Due to the fact that Monday was a holiday, we will not be able to complete the job until Wednesday.