A message for love....

[mido_3000]

The moons draw your face
The sky wrote your name
You lighted everybody life’s
You were the road and the aim
You were the peace
You were the color
You were the meaning
You meant the life
When you have gone
Everything lost the shape
You gave me hope
You gave me faith
How can I now complete
This empty space
You gave me signs
You gave me time
How can I just
Find the way again
I wish you come back
And carry my sadness
Waiting you with the sea
Counting all the wives
Waiting you with the birds
Which come to their places
When you will
Come back to me again?
I’ll always waiting
I’ll wait your heaven
And your graces
I am in race with time
Would you end this race?

Come to my life. Fill this space

was written by me:
mr_mido_3000@yahoo.com

[تماضر(17)]

thanks a lot

[ola4]

thx for the nice poem
well done
but u have some mistakes that i gave mysekf the permission to correct


The moons drew your face
The sky wrote your name
You lighted everybody's life
You were the road and the aim
You were the peace
You were the color
You were the meaning
You meant the life
When you have gone
Everything lost the shape
You gave me hope
You gave me faith
How can I now complete
This empty space
You gave me signs
You gave me time
How can I just
Find the way again
I wish you come back
And carry my sadness
Waiting for you with the sea
Counting all the waves
Waiting for you with the birds
Which come to their places
When will you
Come back to me again?
I’ll always be waiting
I’ll wait your heaven
And your graces
I am in race with time
Would you end this race?

Come to my life. Fill this space

[mido_3000]

thank you for corrections. i'll pay more attention next time.anyway thank you

[slafe14]

it's wonderful and have an reall feel

[bilelkha]

thank you
it's wonderful