Monday girl my sec poem in the forum pls say what you think!!!

[mido_3000]

Monday girl
Just feel like seeing you everyday
but I really see you on Monday
trying to figure out what your eyes say
yea,I should be on your way
O u r the girl of Monday
See words into your eyes
Talking to me wiz a few words
I should tell you otherwise
All my word won’t stay
O the girl of Monday
Should hold your hand someday
Being so much in love,
I know it’s not even enough
Why this feeling is so tough
When you gone away
I love you more everyday
Because you leave me needing you
And it’s getting harder each day
Come back and take all my life away
And I promise I will never miss a Monday

[ola4]

thx for the poem
its simple but nice

keep trying :)