PLZ give me your opinion, I wrote that

[nice world]

Will Be
Think hard of your life,
Searsh carefully for your soul,
Just look to your heart,
Just hear your tears,
If I was there,
I will never be away

[ola4]

its good that ur trying to write
trying is the first step even if there r mistakes
but actually there is no relation with the sentences'
try to write things that r connected to each other
even if there rmistakes they will look good

[h-pain]

The first step is always the most difficult one;however, you managed to take it though there are mistakes,but it's good to try and have the others help you
good luck

[humanfaith]

i totally agree with Ola4

[عذبة الأطباع]

http://alshahen.*******rabi.com/*******-f1/
اكتب موضوعك في هذا الربط وستجد المساعدة في اقرب وقت
تحياتي

[المحارب القديم]

I Ts Good To Try
And Always The First Try Have Mistakes
And Without Mistakes No One Can Learn
Keep On My Friend And Don't Lets The Little Mistakes Stop You

[كرموش]

nice world: It's search and not 'searsh' -D
المحارب القدي: In english, you don't capitalize every first letter of a word.

[love for ever_2008]

شكرااااااااااااااا

[classicman702]

search more than u seek keep up the good work my friend

[material girl]

it,s so gorgeous as a first try but there is spelling mistake

searsh=search

[tigershaker]

good job,,, keep going just try to read more then try to write :)
regards

[hope101]

thanks alot
you have some problems in the spelling
also the rythem in not the same

[hbailla]

keep on brother
you will be the best