^^Please read my first sonnet

[the_black_knight]

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My........


The sparkle in thy beautiful eyes
Thy smile, laugh,
Thy kiss, thy words.
Are just a few of many reasons!
To give you this words...
Word's from my deep heart
Deep love..
Hope to know what thou mean to me...


I could search the whole world over
And this I know is true
I would never find a blossom rose
A perfect angel...
A shiny star...
Like thou are my beautifull flower



^^ Hope u enjoy it my dear's friend's

[hearty00]

good attempt , though i wonder what it is the relationship between the possessive pronoun you picked as the title of this sonnet and the content of what you have written??

[the_black_knight]

Thanks bro for reading this sonnet , and i picked up "My..."as a titel cuz i stay wonder if she is a Flower or Angel or....... :p


NB: 3 Participation it was a mistak cuz i stay newbie in those stuff :D

[hearty00]

don't worry about it because this spot is clinically death so your participations though there are repeated would spring life to this forum, go on posting , i wonder if it is the first time you write poetry because masaallah you have done the most of it.
i have another question, why you have chosen an old style like sonnet ? in addition to that you ****** is also "death"
is there is an explanation of this pick up???

NB: i feel i 'd irratate you these consecutive wonders , don't I?? :)

[the_black_knight]

Thanx bro for encrage me accly i duno why i chose that style " Sonnet " :p
NB: u r not irritating me :D thx again