My first poem "Am alone"

[hbailla]

Am alone


Am alone in a small home
No friends, no family , no mom
I feel strange in this night
Where there is no sun ,no light

My story is really well-known
Coz everybody have known
That we can't stay forever in this town
And we will abandon it to the unknown

I was sleeping in my bed
While I died, and I couldn't stand
So they took me to the cemetery
And they throw me in a hole without pity

I don't know where I will go
To the hellfire? Or to the heaven meadow?
But am waiting for God's forgiveness
Because he is only who can quit my sadness



I don't know if this poem is good or bad ? But it's my first experience.


Hamza bailla

[hearty00]

mashallah, i am fond of this starightforward style of composing poems.
i encourage you to pursue this experience i am sure you can explore alot of things including what you might not know about yourself. another tip i want to advise you read alot before writing i am sure it will inspire you more than you think.
keep it up . here is my email if you want to discuss this more
show_84-trust@hotmail.com

wasalam alikom

hearty00