مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : whats ur feeling now!
Miss.Butterfly!!
07-22-2007, 03:54 PM
ladies and gentlman
welcome 2 my topic that I hope will intersting and join with me
our topic about whats inside ur heart !!??
whats ur passion??now?
whats ur feeling now?
?
express ur feeling.is it?.hate..love..fear..disspoint?
or feel alone ::(
about me ********
*****love*****[/COLOR[COLOR="Navy"]]
!love it so important 2 my heart its abreath
I cant live without breath..
love gives me happy live even if there some pain..
love makes me take care about who love him..
it makes me worring about him all time
love makes me walk in a right way 2 arrive 2 my dream
!
love advices me and guieds
me 2 not fall down..
Itrust about love !!
Ibelieve about it
my first love:is God !!
God
Allah who creat all human being
and the other..
second love ..mohammad peace be up in him
the messenger of all people..
my third love :is afcourse my mom and pa..
Beside my best friends ..
thats all :smailes103:
what about u ?
plz if there any mistake can u correct it 2 me I will be so glad 4 ur correcting
coz Im just in level one
ماشاءالله :smailes35: :smailes35:
Miss.Butterfly!!
07-23-2007, 12:44 AM
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Ifeel Im so fear
!
all body leave me ...
am alone like amoon
whare are u ??
Icant hear u
I just hear my voice call u
my heart so pain
where did u go??
Icant see u anymore
!!!!
Ineed u plz come back soon
my brother
come baaaaaaaaaaaack Icant live without u
Ihave some pain in my heart
plz come soon Im waiting u
will u come 4 me????
Miss.Butterfly!!
07-23-2007, 12:59 AM
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my Best gift
How can I explain my feeling in that day
when u gave me the red heart
Imean lovely red rose
I loved it so much
Iwish it can live much time
:smailes111:
but its live in my memory
but really its still best gift from best friend
:o
Icouldnt 4get that day
!!
be sure Icant forget u
u exist there
in my heart
in my soul
be there always
until Ican see u maybe not here
maby in the heaven
!
God willing
love y
Miss.Butterfly!!
07-23-2007, 01:11 AM
No comment !!
oh :(
broken heart
Miss.Butterfly!!
07-24-2007, 01:35 PM
hey where are u Im so angry :(
Deeno
08-10-2007, 09:04 PM
first thing I wan't to thank you for this topic
..secondly my English not so good but I want to try
I'am faer from future , my career future
and I'am faer from god because I think I'am really guilty
and I ask god to forgivingness
and ask him to let me in the haven with my parents
this is all for now
Miss.Butterfly!!
08-29-2007, 11:10 PM
up
thank u so much deeno ur poetry so pretty I love it plz continue
u r amazing just complete
regards
my dear you have some mistakes in what you wrote
and i will try to correct them
ladies and gentlmen
welcome 2 my topic that I hope it will interest you and make you join me
our topic is about what's inside ur heart !!??
whats ur passion??now?
whats ur feeling now?
?
express ur feeling.is it?.hate..love..fear..disappointment?
or you feel alone ::(
as for me ********
*****love*****[/COLOR]
!love [COLOR=red]is so important 2 my heart its a breath
I cant live without breath..
love gives me happiness live even if there is some pain..
love makes me take care of whom I love ..
it makes me worry about him all the time
love makes me walk in a right way 2 reach 2 my dream
!
love advises me and guides
me not to fall down..
Itrust love !!
Ibelieve in it
my first love:is God !!
God
Allah who created all human beings
and the other..
second love ..mohammad peace be upon him
the messenger of all people..
my third love :is of course my mom and pa..
Beside my best friends ..
thats all :smailes103:
what about u ?
plz if there are any mistakes can u correct it 2 me I will be so glad 4 ur correcting
coz Im just in level one
I feel Im so afraid
!
everyone leaves me ...
I am alone like a moon
whare are u ??
I cant hear u
I just hear my voice calling u
my heart is so painful
where did u go??
I cant see u anymore
!!!!
I need u plz come back soon
my brother
come baaaaaaaaaaaack I cant live without u
I have some pain in my heart
plz come soon Im waiting for u
will u come back to me????
my Best gift
How can I explain my feeling in that day
when u gave me the red heart
I mean a lovely red rose
I loved it so much
I wish it can live a longer time
:smailes111:
but its life in my memory
but really its still the best gift from a best friend
:o
I couldnt 4get that day
!!
be sure I cant forget u
u exist there
in my heart
in my soul
be there always
until Ic an see u maybe not here
maby in the heaven
!
God willing
love y