A tale of two cockroachs

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once upon a bug time , into a wall
close , close , to a kitchen of humans
there was an insects kingdom
with a darken , moisture rhythem
where a very united cockroachs were living
only for two of them , that tale was written

( to be continued )

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his name was Rorchi and hers was Cucarocha
she was his only pest dream , his life was only for Cuca
every darken night , he was watching an amzing thing
Cuca with her dark brown , glossy body
and her short wings below her small head
that charming Cuca , was making him impatient
waiting the night they would mate

[ola4]

very funny my friend
just correct the word rythm(this is how it is written)
and use dark and not darken

thank you

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But , human's neclear world had another trend
on a dark night , Rotchi went out for food
sensory legs over kitchen' wall and all he was thinking
was his beloved bug and their new home
where they should have their cockroachi dream

[same_old_story]

once upon a bug time , into a wall
close , close , to a kitchen of humans
there was an insects kingdom
with a dark , moisture rythm
where a very united cockroachs were living
only for two of them , that tale was written

his name was Rorchi and hers was Cucarocha
she was his only pest dream , his life was only for Cuca
every darken night , he was watching an amzing thing
Cuca with her dark brown , glossy body
and her short wings below her small head
that charming Cuca , was making him impatient
waiting the night they would mate


But , human's neclear world had another trend
on a dark night , Rotchi went out for food
sensory legs over kitchen' wall and all he was thinking
was his beloved bug and their new home
where they should have their cockroachi dream

suddenly, he was grabbed to reality by a kitchen light
turned on by a human in a shape of giant
but what had made Rotchi's sensory bristels
were about to be torn out
was that Cuca was on the other side
she was exposed by the human giant

Rotchi was about to fly to help
but he bugged still with a slipper's sound
crack , crack , crack was all that heard
with the fourth crack Cuca was shot
cracking Cuca had broken Rotchi's bug heart

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thanks so much ola

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i have not finish the tale yet
and waite your comments

[hearty00]

http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/2016/1602922829dfa3475cbky3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

,very meaning tale :smailes103: , ur style of writting is awesome it's :smailes66: poem here

the image above can inspires u to some kind of ending the tale:smailes86:

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http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/2016/1602922829dfa3475cbky3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

,very meaning tale :smailes103: , ur style of writting is awesome it's :smailes66: poem here

the image above can inspires u to some kind of ending the tale:smailes86:

hearty good to see you friend:smailes70: ... i want to tell you that i was writting that poem with tears of laugh and also for the drama of two craked hearts :smailes90: , i promise you i will finish it soon as iam somehow busy these days ...thanks aloooot hearty and i want to ask you about something
how did you get the photo :smailes2: of Rotchi as i did not tell anyone that he had stabbed himself after cuca's death :smailes102:

[ola4]

A very sad story but a nice one still
eventhough i hate cockroaches

every dark night , he was watching an amazing thing
human's nuclear
http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p165/3ola4/thx/thx56.gif

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thanks OLA i am too lazy to check for spelling mistakes
but i will try hard to remember thanks again

and here another part of the tale

He could not sense what he saw
that human had squeezed Cuca's soul
Rotchi stopped his tracheae breath
while Cuca was sunken into her orange blood

Rotchi saw Cuca's head was still moving
but that hope from him was taken
as the giant made the same slipper execution
Rotchi was about to flip on his back
he watched his cockroachiii love was gone


----- we will be right back ----------

[same_old_story]

once upon a bug time , into a wall
close , close , to a kitchen of humans
there was an insects kingdom
with a dark , moisture rythm
where a very united cockroachs were living
only for two of them , that tale was written

his name was Rorchi and hers was Cucarocha
she was his only pest dream , his life was only for Cuca
every darken night , he was watching an amzing thing
Cuca with her dark brown , glossy body
and her short wings below her small head
that charming Cuca , was making him impatient
waiting the night they would mate


But , human's neclear world had another trend
on a dark night , Rotchi went out for food
sensory legs over kitchen' wall and all he was thinking
was his beloved bug and their new home
where they should have their cockroachi dream

suddenly, he was grabbed to reality by a kitchen light
turned on by a human in a shape of giant
but what had made Rotchi's sensory bristels
were about to be torn out
was that Cuca was on the other side
she was exposed by the human giant

Rotchi was about to fly to help
but he bugged still with a slipper's sound
crack , crack , crack was all that heard
with the fourth crack Cuca was shot
cracking Cuca had broken Rotchi's bug heart

Rotchi roamed desperatly after that squeeze party
Cuca's orange blood sticked to his mind
that was enough reason to end his short bug life

he picked the place where Cuca was craked
he made his last move , he flipped on his back
Rotchi faced the moment with pleasure
he was assassinated by the same old slipper

( THE BEGINING )

is not enough for human
that cockroaches sleep when we are awaken
and they are awaken when we are sleeping
see you next poem friends :smailes59:

[ola4]

thank you again my friend
for this nice poem
and we are waiting for the next ones

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[White Lily]

Urggggghh
even though I'm scared to death of cochroches and insicts but this is really funny and inspring
you are very creative so plz share us these amazing things all the times

[Haniscape]

funny story
continue your good efforts and pay more attention to your spelling and your language will be excellent for sure
n shaa Allah

[antonyo-2003]

والله يا عم انك اصبتني بالقرف ةالاحباط وانا الان نفسان تعبيا
ههههههههههههههههههههههههههه

[hbailla]

you are the best bro