Never to say i miss you

[reho]

salamo 3alayko de awel poem english to post in the forum,so i wanna ur opinion honestly
Never to say i miss you


,Never to say i miss you
,if your heart doesn't mean it too
,ur lips are just the way
.but your eyes say it everyday

,Never say it coz it lose the meaning
,they used to say it with no feeling
,but ur eyes say it in a different way
.and my heart shouted with joy

,Hence, our souls are mixed together
,and seems to be one soul forever
,it's aim never to lose each other
.if life separated us we have to gather

,Never always saying i miss you
,but also deeply, inside and always do
,So be mine forever
.say it to me differently as ever

[taheyat]

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You wrote this poem ...
next time make the mood-congruent little bit UP
Thanks sister .............

[ola4]

thx for sharing us with your poem

the meaning is very nice

but there are some grammar mistakes

and i think there is something wrong in this

Never always saying i miss you
,but also deeply, inside and always do

thx again dear and your are most welcome to share us with your poems whenever you like

[hearty00]

very romantic poem indeed , i wonder if it is out of a concrete experience

Never always saying i miss you
i don't think it exist a fault in this sentence , because we can applay the ing forum after the adverb of frequency such "always" , in the case when you are expressing your unsatisfaction with a certain action that repeat sevral times

[fade nore]

thx alot my friend about all

[coldcoca]

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[the_black_knight]

Thx nice poem

[nice world]

your poem is soooooooo romantic

[muhammad morsi]

sooooooooo greaaaat
thank you very much sister

[zeid alyasiry]

thanks a lot dear for this nice poem, we appreciate your sharing,

[sas_159]

thx alot >>
i hope a good luck for u,,,reho
thx

[lord of the flies]

thanx for all m frind its nice but tell me is it poem or sonnet