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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Born to Fight


hearty00
12-09-2006, 01:53 PM
salam alikom here is another poem i just wrote it yesterday ,though i have not finished yet .but i 'd love to share this first part with you inshallah .

It still too much to say ; it still too much to know
But here , i 'd rather conclude my night
Looking for the ultimate bliss
It 's an uneasy task
I see the hill too far for a fair race
And my path too engufled with the same throngs
But wisdom words of a friend i still keep them in my heart
Saying our faith's to fight
Born to Fight remember we are the knights
There were his very lines


Yes , don't let the yearn overcome your will not to unsheat the sword of right
If ever happned myself becomes my own enemy , i'd go to war mercilessly this night
Still too much to know , Still too much i'd love to say
Along the clashes of a small of voice
Steel your grid to glow
A radiant spteepled blade
Crack your path an alien
For a sweetyheart mundane
Rivers of honey , pure milk and wine
All sort of bliss deserve a sacrifice

to be continued ....

ola4
12-10-2006, 02:41 PM
thank you hearty

for sharing with us your poems

please just check the spelling of some words

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hearty00
12-11-2006, 09:50 AM
i am guilty you do have to fire me out from your forum
, i check the poem closely , i 've just found to conclude has missed an "e" , if you noticed and another mistake please correct . after all you are the teacher here

scorpionking4999
12-11-2006, 05:36 PM
THANKS VERY MUCH FOR THIS GREAT POEM
I HOPE YOU WOULD ALWAYS SHARE US YOUR POEMS
BUT I FOUND 2 SPELLING MISTAKES THEY ARE :
enguflled:ENGULFED
AND
merceless: should be MERCILESS
with best wishes

ola4
12-11-2006, 07:17 PM
thanks hearty for correcting and editing

I think this is much more better

and be sure i will never fire you out

because this forum for all of us and not mine

thanks again and your most welcome

waiting to see the rest of the poem

hearty00
12-11-2006, 11:02 PM
thanks hearty for correcting and editing

I think this is much more better

and be sure i will never fire you out

because this forum for all of us and not mine

thanks again and your most welcome

waiting to see the rest of the poem


thanks so much sister and broder for your concern
i correct it the mistakes , there are stupid by the way i wouldn't have put my foot in it if i type slowly
for now you can comment on the poem easily
salam