Casablanca

[hearty00]

clarifiction before (stating the death of a my city is not necessarily a hatred feeling , but i utilized the fact that everything has an end trying to test my emoitions at the end of everything ) anyway


Casablanca till you die I wonder how long I‘ll survive.
Rise my soul up in this strife
Casablanca your life is bright. Yet not at all your sides You ain’t that pure white blows no more shine a light
You ai'nt a fine light fade up no more brings out
I ain’t in a maze where all I see is darkened
And remote flashes of a deceptive glare that sparkle
I ain’t be confused to recognize a pure shining light
Rescue my cause
don’t downing to fall a gab of illusive dreamlike
I dislike to subvert kinda those a zeal devotion lack
Dunya overwhelm their will to cling on their real salvation
Dump blinded to see their real damnation
Barley the appetite of life kills the dignity of living

Casablanca till you die I wonder how long I ‘ ll survive. Rise my soul up in this strife
Casablanca your life is bright. Yet not at all your sides
He( satan)holds all the animosity for me, some don’t care about
Yet it‘s easy to claim what won’t carry out
The situation is nearby the climax
Cause the revolution man‘s being brook out
He tries to shift toward the right safe peace and truly faith
But the devils is scheming for a deceptive to follow him
Work up and down the scale to follow him
Dig for the jugular point down depth
The committee declares war nag goes through the kindred
And friend’s care has been disseminated
This is one of the plot devils fabricate brightly
When they seen you moving torward the right path safely
The devil intrigue to make you Effy
Affliction at its peak when devils committee
Dispatch its chosen nominee
With deceptive policy; but you stand strong cause you are with Allah unity
Effete will won4t lead you lean at the Eden
Infectious deeds certainly will
Momentous relish won’t be extinguish
See the bless that you distinguish
Waken up early in the morn for the almighty
Sure when you make the ablution
Allah send Angeles every time for protection
They keep with the almighty affiliation
See the feet planted firmly
Cause you responded the Greta’s call this day
After a night‘s darkness till day’s dusk

Guiding me Allah, hold me on Allah, heading us Allah , calling us

Guiding me Allah tasting your sweaty sides and don’t want to live
Heading your seeds into my chest and believe
Grow up the faith blow out the devils web don at the grave
heading us set out for your right street straight
Cover us with a mercy cast our net wide
Those your almighty have chosen will absolutely enjoy and bear the fruit in this life and hereafter life you taste them your the merciful the certain real bless
They have been tested this superficial life sort
they‘ll be gratified not to touch the forbidden fruit

[hichamochka]

You have done a good job man, but the style is a arabic if you read it from a stylistic piont of view.

!Carry on

[hearty00]

yes man thanks for your praticipation , i'd appreciate your comment , solely, if you have sustained your argument with an evidency inshallah .
but i 'll try to deduce your obeservation is due to some ; arabic terms i utilize always in my poems , but was it mean only to shed a light on my arabic and islamic identity that i am proud of inshallah
i 'll await show us where i have lingred to the arabic style

[hichamochka]

Thanks for your reply
First, when I stated you shifted to Arabic Style, I didn’t mean to sell your Arab and Islam background short. Arabic is undoubtedly the most beautiful language in the globe so much so that Arabs are lagging behind solely because they are fascinated by their beautiful language and keep praising it.

Second, the general mood in the poem entitled Casablanca is very much like the tone of Arabic poetry, as it has reminded me of the talented Mahmud Darouich and other Arab poets who adopt the same kind of style. Furthermore, the poem is implanted with so many Arabic terms that Non-Arab readers will fail to crasp. I am no expert in poetry but, i can attribute this to the fact that your readership is limited to the Arab reader. However, it is good to put yourself in what you write, since poetry is meant to be that way (externalising what you have inside).

On the other hand I appreciate your good and healthy English. You definately have a good command of the language. I encourage you to hold on writing poetry. And I also suggest that you imitate famous poets like Robert Frost and Yeats who wrote the best of poetry.

Good Luck my friend,
Hichamochka,

[hearty00]

yes man good to hear that from you ; actually , i am guilty because i claim that the arabic is the most excelent language in the existence , but on the other hand when i look back , i say what after all one like me have maintainded to this language to boast that he loves the arabe language . here again if you ask me what your recent arabic reading i'd fail to respond proudly .
i always think that the cultural-crisis of the arabe world world is that ;barely, when you take up the bus find someone browsing on a book
this is also due to the educational upbring we are brought up with especially in our earlier elementry studies
anyway , it is another issue we will discuss it later on inshallah , now back to the poem , you said that the tone prevailed in it is alike those great arabe figuers , actually it's a honour i do not claim
also , a full inspiration from any poet i didn't ever bound to that may be later on .
you suggested also , that i might likely imitate the grant englsih poet like , frost and yeat , this latten by the way i have passed an test on his poetry just this afternoon
but actually i don't it a practical condiction to produce an outstanding poetry
your notice that my poem is only conscrated to a particular audience is by ne mean as my first claim nor was i intended that it will a reader for my poem ; but later on i saw that i can share with my friends , then i dared to post it largely into the islamic forums


now while i am discussing with you this , i should take into acount a potential reader unlike the one who shares the same islamic identity as i do . pray i 'd take this point into my latter my consideration .
for the moment my concern is to revert my idnetity i always belive that if we on the other pay a respect for our heritage we should we must play this role first of all by ourselves .
to conclude i would like to tell me how do you understand my writting , cause i'd love to discuss the contents and the meaning of this poem

[hichamochka]

Speaking of the Arab crisis, I would like to say that the deference between us and the developed societies is the attitude of the people framed along the years by Education and Culture. Upon analyzing the behaviour of the people in developed countries, we find that the great majority follow a number of principles in their lives such as:

• Ethics.
• Integrity.
• Responsibility.
• Respect to the laws and rules.
• Respect to the rights of other citizen.
• Work loving.
• Punctuality.

Unthankfully, only a minority in the Arab world adhere to these basic principles. To sum up “There is something wrong somewhere in our social formula”.

As far as my understanding of your poem is concerned, I see it as a lamentation over the seemingly dying Casablanca. It seems that this city (its people) is being seduced by Satan and is driven by “appetite of life” which could refer to lust, corruption etc. Finally, you try to save the city suggesting following the guidance of Allah which is the cure to the dilemma. In many ways, the poem is reminiscent of T.S Eliot’s Waste Land .I hope my interpretation is to the point. After all, a work of art is open to many interpretations. What do you think?

Hold on!

Looking forward to you reply!

[hearty00]

salam alikom
yes the developed countries ; however ,mightn't be a good exemple to imitate along the way for a perceptive reform. if we explore togther the the issue or the place of the ethics in the western mentality in a wide extend , you 'll find out that since the modern and the actual post modern era a serious or revolutionary disdain of moralities especially after the nehilism doctorin of netzche is takening place . a modern intellecual nowadays won't belive at any social reform originate from religion princible . if they they hear from you that u believe that islam can improve a given society , certainly you will be considerd a dogmatic theologist.
if we claim to bring into being a certain reform to take place , we should reframed a straiforward stance with other civilisation .
a lot of the intelletual arabe consider that misery of our actual crisis is caused by the west . for me it is a shallow thinkning , it exsist in our heritage what uprised our civilication and the world all togther , if we just seek for it and present in the manner it should be . on te other hand if we take the western cutural constan reforms i chanlenge any markcisim or capitalism that uplifted one society from poverty for instance , whereas if we look back at Islam there were only one historical event at the era of the oumar ibn aziz when an issue like poverty had been ended
we have dig back into our true exemplary prinsible in islam , don't we ??!!

[mouhim]

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[hearty00]

thanks so much for your interest