In the Jungle : a political poem enjoy it

[hearty00]

In the Jungle

Here candiliza* is named the leopard*secretary of this jungle
Rise*seize the wires of the game whilst sees you lust at the club and gamble
our distinies on ur palm dangle*
you are all participating in this crime don't your blood with cocacola mingle .
ya .... we wield the fluidity so that an innocent vein bleed
a blood crack a river rise to our greed
one day but now the cold breeze ,
pleasing your lovely cheecks and ears
pay a heed ,
you know hate breed ,
hate lend me your ears
your turn now's coming just wait
set about the newz gze n the jungle you are so so sweet ..
in the jungle
let alone blair 's mighty allow him two roles in the game
he is a hynea*lick the dribble
falls from bush spittle , now tony
tony is a hound bounce to bring back some hunted game*.......
to the king .......... in the jungle we are all participating on this crime and a gruesome silence
we are emulating those contemtiple cowardice named leaders heehh leader there are crawling
give rise to change young , dignified oxygen aged long ago i didn't breathe
i see some caged in a clandistine dreamz and a boat of death
scrumble out reality , hustled into a visionary or slumber, sailling in unchattred waters
see the old land too close
hey wait you know i learn must tuck the identity quickly and now
an arab is what will block my path to earn euro and honey no doubt
with alicrity of bees i'd work daily
pass the thorns that pock my bottom
forgo the nostalgia yearning of a missed bossom*
now weave on the streets still hung that flagrant features
shave my face & bow my head still hold this conspicious features
my's forfeit to the future , hearing roars of the hell roam
my fate a tale now for you to learn and face : man's race to a randezvous of haters and wrest a nafes goes off bush called a terrorist
and you and i our my's go to rest watch the game on the newz and gaze in the jungle

Glossory

1st line :*the secretary of the state in the united state . * A large, ferocious cat (Panthera pardus) of Africa and southern Asia, having either tawny fur with dark rosettelike markings or black fur. ( in fact the blak skin will lead directly to the sense that i'd like )
2nd: * the surname of the secreatry of the usa
3rd:*To cause (one's expectations or hopes) to hang uncertainly or remain unresolved
12th:*Any of several carnivorous mammals,which feed as scavengers and have powerful jaws, relatively short hind limbs, and coarse hair.(as exacly ur blair )
13th:*The flesh of these animals, eaten as food.
23th:*The chest of a human ( hint to the tender of a missed mother )

[ola4]

thank you my friend for the poem
but it contains some spelling mistakes
that needs to be corrected

and please allow me to organize it more
okkk
waiting for your reply

[hearty00]

yes my friend please feel free to commont on my faults ,after all we are here to learn . actualy i am always guily of disrespcting the spelling or the structure of the english because most of my knowlegde of the english is rather it's oral aspect

also i hope you appreciate the meaning of the content , because the poets are always accused of disrepcting the forum of the language
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[hbailla]

thanks my friend all we sufre from english spealing but we are here to learn from each other

[hearty00]

yes friend you are absolutly right the best thing is to lessen yourself while you are expressingin a new language , the important is to express urself unless you keep frienghting from making mistakes , you'll never learn somlething worthy in your life

for your last comments i noticed some misspelling need to be corrected inshallah such as : to suffer and to spell

[hearty00]

In the Jungle

Here candiliza* is named the leopard*secretary of this jungle
Rise*seize the wires of the game whilst sees you lust at the club and gamble
our distinies on ur palm dangle*
you are all participating in this crime don't your blood with cocacola mingle .
ya .... we wield the fluidity so that an innocent vein bleed
a blood crack a river rise to our greed
one day but now the cold breeze ,
pleasing your lovely cheecks and ears
pay a heed ,
you know hate breed ,
hate lend me your ears
your turn now's coming just wait
set about the newz gze n the jungle you are so so sweet ..
in the jungle
let alone blair 's mighty allow him two roles in the game
he is a hynea*lick the dribble
falls from bush spittle , now tony
tony is a hound bounce to bring back some hunted game*.......
to the king .......... in the jungle we are all participating on this crime and a gruesome silence
we are emulating those contemtiple cowardice named leaders heehh leader there are crawling
give rise to change young , dignified oxygen aged long ago i didn't breathe
i see some caged in a clandistine dreamz and a boat of death
scrumble out reality , hustled into a visionary or slumber, sailling in unchattred waters
see the old land too close
hey wait you know i learn must tuck the identity quickly and now
an arab is what will block my path to earn euro and honey no doubt
with alicrity of bees i'd work daily
pass the thorns that pock my bottom
forgo the nostalgia yearning of a missed bossom*
now weave on the streets still hung that flagrant features
shave my face & bow my head still hold this conspicious features
my's forfeit to the future , hearing roars of the hell roam
my fate a tale now for you to learn and face : man's race to a randezvous of haters and wrest a nafes goes off bush called a terrorist
and you and i our my's go to rest watch the game on the newz and gaze in the jungle

Glossory

1st line :*the secretary of the state in the united state . * A large, ferocious cat (Panthera pardus) of Africa and southern Asia, having either tawny fur with dark rosettelike markings or black fur. ( in fact the blak skin will lead directly to the sense that i'd like )
2nd: * the surname of the secreatry of the usa
3rd:*To cause (one's expectations or hopes) to hang uncertainly or remain unresolved
12th:*Any of several carnivorous mammals,which feed as scavengers and have powerful jaws, relatively short hind limbs, and coarse hair.(as exacly ur blair )
13th:*The flesh of these animals, eaten as food.
23th:*The chest of a human ( hint to the tender of a missed mother )

oh :smailes64: i have just nocticed you edition ,heaps thanks for ,you had really make a new setting more adequate for the readers of the poem , your touch really adds a new cozy atmospher for poem , for me i lacked this kind of details that i know only female hands manage to set it , thank very much friend :smailes37:

[ola4]

You are most welcome
dear friend

Hope to see more of Your topics

But I have a question for you

Why don't you share with us in the other sections

of the English forum

we will be very glad in you participations and even comments

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[hearty00]

yes , i 'd like to participate , but one thing i noticed is poeple here are mainly concerned with mastering the english by sharing programs and so forth , i see it will be more beneficial if you start discussing and debating topics

[hichamochka]

I fully agree with you herty00, discussing topics in English is very much the thing which will improve our English and especially our way of thinking.

[hearty00]

yes i guess the Admins here should think to specify section for this kind of debates , i see from the first hand that you are a trained debatable broder hichammochoka , anyhow we should await the Admins view on this idea , inshallah

[hichamochka]

You too sound promissing, looking forward to the Admins ' initiative

[hearty00]

yes bro tell me what do you think about the contents of in the jungle , please let me know your view .