falling apart

[freedove1]

.hi this is a poem for some one i really love

Falling apart

Falling apart

.Yes. I'm falling apart when you are away from me

.I just can't stand being alone without you with me

.Your face, your smile, and your words when you talk to me

.I miss every thing we do together, every thing you do for me

.You are my world; you’re the one who was made to complete me

Falling apart

.As the sky is lighten by stars, my life is lighten by you

.In all the nights I only have one dream which is you

.Every prayer I do I ask Allah to makes me for you

.I'm always strong except……..in front of you

.I like every moment…baby…I spend with you

.In my whole life I never loved a man as I do love you

Falling apart

.Ya baby I do so never ever be away from me

.The dark of my loneliness appears when you aren't with me

?!Did you get it

.I'm truly for you

[Haniscape]

strong feelings reflected easily within your verses Dove
although you have to work harder on your vocabulary and structure
but you have a fine sense
continue your good stuff

[hbailla]

thanks
but don't play music
it is forbeden
we are muslem
am sorry

[freedove1]

thanks my brother hani and i really know that i have to work on my english more and that what i,m seeking for

and thanks my brother habilla for passing and about music believe me i didn,t hear the music of my signature as i,m facing problems with my computer but in general i love music and i don,t know exactly what,s the islam,s view in music but deep in my heart i think it,s allright as long as it,s a good music
it,s my opinion and i respect yours

[ورود و أشواك]

what ever i said i couldnt explaine
how i admire ur words

great words
+
from a great poet
=
fantastice poem


thx alot dear
urs
menna

[أنا ياسر]

very very good work
thanxxxx sister
i think u should work on your voca


greattttttttttttttttttt

[freedove1]

thanks menna for ur words u r truly cute

and thanks my brother yasser too and ya i,m working on my voca

[engmin]

great jop
i wouldnot say more than that

[freedove1]

that,s enough for me my dear brother and friend

[Ibrahim H]

walla my friend walla :smailes60: great job well done I actually dont no why they keep saying work on ur voca ur writing a poem ur trying to follow a certain rythm and rhyme its ur feelings theres nothing u can do . and again good job :smailes46: