My first poem

[Haniscape]

Hello dear friends
I'd like to share this poem with
you , i wrote it today
I hope you like it
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Is that your answer my beloved
i waited so long to see your face
yet you got my heart grapped
since you put it in the first place
your own family and never ours.

truely theyin money only have faith
they don't care about thy feeling or mine
and i still put my trust in Allah's grace
to fulfill my aims with hard work no decline
and soon reunited shall we be.

from my poems collection :
Life and me

your brother Haniscape

[freedove1]

it,s good brother in its meaning but there r some words i couldn,t understand(thy feeling)
hope the reunited be soon for u and ur beloved

[Haniscape]

dear Dove
in the poetic English it's common to make inversions between the parts of speech for example u can say

you shall the college enter
and the high mark obtain


= you shall enter the college
and obtain ( get ) high mark

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and as for the article thy = your
thou = you
etc.= et cetra الخ

و أى استفسار أنا موجود ان شاء الله

[hbailla]

thanks
you have a stronge intention to write poem
that's good

[freedove1]

thanks and i,m waiting to learn more from ur writtings brother

[the_black_knight]

Very nice poem thanx

[bchouli]

! You're great
!!!!! I'd like to be a famous POET
???? How can i