thoughts

[freedove1]

sir, tell me until when should I take.
.sir, I lost the way...and my heart really felt the pain
.where to go...? what to do...? I'm confused
.I can't just stand like that. only watching as a fan
no. no. no
.No I won't...; I will move..., I will change the world
.My voice..., my words... will be my swords
.Hear what u may wanna say but words didn't come out from ur mouth
.they r killing our ppl, women and children...with no care
?...they r taking our homes, food and money and who cares
.I'm tired...u r tired and all the Arabs r tired

?...but guess what
.it won't last
.I'm gonna wake u up...gonna make it right
?................................................. ........will u help
come on don't make me wait a lot.

[k.r.m]

words become worthless
we don't need words to use as swords
we need ourselves to use as a swords
we have to pay our bodies and our blood

[freedove1]

first thanking for passing by
then i don,t agree with u sir on what u wrote,words can be harder than guns
didn,t u hear about Gandi but i can,t say that only words will change what is going on now but that,s all what i have to give here
and i think it,s better than silence
we may differ in our thoughts but that,s why every one is special

[sarah_love]

شكرا على الpoem الرائع

[freedove1]

thank u sister but it,s not a poem it,s just free thoughts i,d like to share u

[engmin]

I'm gonna wake u up...gonna make it righ

this is the best part

thank u

[freedove1]

it,s as u said so thanks for passing by
and did u wake up?

[NOORG]

first thanking for passing by
then i don,t agree with u sir on what u wrote,words can be harder than guns
didn,t u hear about Gandi but i can,t say that only words will change what is going on now but that,s all what i have to give here
and i think it,s better than silence
we may differ in our thoughts but that,s why every one is special

thank U my lady
but I disagree that the words can be harder than swords
If U read history then U will realize that GREAT nations have the POWER
the FORCIBLY
not Just UR word
Or for Ghandi,s Goat
this shorten notice for dreamers
Kind REGARDS

[scorpionking4999]

Very good and impressive poem
it exppress what we all feel

[White Lily]

I really like the pattern you chose for these thoughts
allow me to say, this is what we really feal
the words are really expressive and sincere

thanks for sharing us and keep it up

[hbailla]

good work
keep on

[freedove1]

thanks for every one. ur words were really so cute .